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Hi. Try to follow the plan on page 17.

by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 17 Jan 2015 22:02

The number of words should be at least 150. This essay has 115 words.

by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 28 Dec 2014 21:17

Deadline: Day 4th, 1393

by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 17 Dec 2014 16:00

OK lads. Now it's time to build a good essay out of this first draft.

The new mission by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 29 Nov 2014 19:00

Hi everybody. This isn't perfect. There are many grammatical and lexical (vocabulary) errors in it. Moreover, Siavash has no contribution to the development of this essay. Anyway, there are some wrong corrections:
in great details
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by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 21 Nov 2014 15:32

Thank you yashar after the number we always use singular verb and the orginal structure of' the clothes worn' was' the clothes which are worn' i deleted 'which are' To make the sentece complicated.

by Ali AnsariAli Ansari, 13 Nov 2014 15:30

Hi Yashar. You don't need to bold the mistakes. Look at the bottom of this page. After "Edit" is "History". Click on it then click on "Compare". This way you can compare your version with the last version. Good luck.

by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 13 Nov 2014 15:27

Thank you Mr Ansari for warning us about our mistakes .
I found some mistakes in different paragraphs too and I bold them in parantesses

by Yashar BashiriYashar Bashiri, 13 Nov 2014 10:20

Hi guys please use appropriate punctuation and donot use informal words like guy in an formal essay.in addition, exploit sufficent linkers. Passive structures improve quility of the essay. Honestely i am terrible at spelling please correct if you find.

by Ali AnsariAli Ansari, 12 Nov 2014 19:33

I think you should use (are) instead of (is) in last paragraph .
I myself had a mistake too , I should use (has) instead of (have) in last paragraph , second line .

finding mistakes by Yashar BashiriYashar Bashiri, 12 Nov 2014 08:55

Hi dudes. It is fantastic as your first experience of wiki writing but I recommend you to revise the essay several times. Yashar and Soheil initiated the task, but their job is not accomplished yet. The revisions by Soheil on yashar's initial text might not be correct. Where are Ali, Sina, and Siavash? Come on! revise and enrich the essay.

Good job! by Mehdi KaramiMehdi Karami, 10 Nov 2014 21:22
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